Here is the second entry for SR:Baloney! I’m sure this won’t be my only camp story.
I liked the idea of imagining showing my future kids the camp, and I may return to that type of storytelling. It took me a bit to figure out how to jump between the past and the future, but I think using the italics worked well.
The “staining with colorful language” is a thing I’ve had in my head since at least high school, but I never managed to get it into any of my work…until now!